I’m preparing my manuscript for journal submission and need a fresh, expert set of eyes to upgrade it. The priority is to strengthen the arguments right across the piece—every section from the introduction through to the discussion should read as a coherent, well-supported narrative that convinces reviewers of the paper’s merit. What I’m looking for: a thorough, critical edit that tightens the logic, explicitly links evidence to each claim, and sharpens the overall contribution to the field. While you work, please also smooth awkward phrasing and improve flow where needed, but keep the focus on argumentative strength rather than heavy stylistic rewrites. Deliverables • A fully revised manuscript in Word with tracked changes • A clean version ready for submission • A brief revision memo outlining the key argument-related improvements made If you have experience transforming draft papers into publication-ready articles, I’d love to collaborate.