I have a draft article that introduces and analyses my latest fiction book from a copy-writing and proofreading perspective. Right now the piece feels flat, and I need it transformed into a sharply written, professionally toned text that pulls readers in from the opening line and keeps them turning pages (or scrolling) until the end. The goals are clear: tighten the narrative flow, sharpen sentence structure, add punchy transitions, and weave in compelling hooks so engagement rises noticeably. Accuracy matters just as much as flair, so every grammatical slip, stylistic inconsistency, and awkward phrase has to disappear. While I’m not chasing keyword density, sprinkling in a few naturally placed search phrases connected to fiction editing, book marketing, and professional proofreading will help the article surface better online. You will work directly in the Google Doc I’ll share, offering both tracked changes and in-line comments when you think a larger tweak or re-ordering will lift the piece. By the end, I expect a polished, publication-ready article of roughly the same length—only leaner, clearer, and far more engaging.